AMERICAN HORROR STORY CAME BACK ON TONIGHT BUT EVAN PETERS DIDN'T APPEAR YET SO IM BITTER-SWEET ABOUT IT! HEY. ALSO. IF YOU HAVEN'T SEEN ANY AMERICAN HORROR STORY YET THEN YOY SHOULD GO BINGE WATCH A SERIES OR TWO.... OR ALL 5 AND RECORD THE ONE THAT IS AIRING. (I'm going to stop screaming now). On the low I have an addiction to the show(probably so I can watch Evan Peters). Which is rather odd considering I absolutely HATE horror shows/movies/etc. I haven't even been in a haunted house before and most people my age go to haunted houses for fun. Then there is me. You could not pay me or give me anything to go into one. Don't get me wrong. I lovvvve adrenaline but I rather not piss myself in the process. Ya feel. I screamed like a small child an overabunant about of times within the hour show.
So I turned in my rough draft today for English. Long story short, I was one of the very few people that only had one or no errors. I was quite elated too because my teacher butchered several peoples papers with just a glance. Which I am going to credit on my blogging so thank you to my loyal readers because without you I wouldn't write and if I didn't write I would probably have butchered my paper more. Granted, we don't turn in the final until Monday so by then I will probably manage to rethink all my writing descisions and screw it up.
Side note: the one error I had was the misspelling of Gory. I spelt it "Gorey" which is actually the name of an author which is why the spell check didnt pick it up because technically I wasn't wrong.
We had a revising/editing workshop today so we all switched papers. Dear God! The girls paper I got was absolutely horrendous. I'm not even trying to be rude or mean or whatever but what in the even. Was she high when she wrote this? So everyone had about thirty topics to chose from. Dhe chose to write about civility and how it nowadays we don't have any. Her thesis statement included a question!! What??! A thesis statement is a DIRECT statement where you promise the reader what they will be reading about.... you don't include a question there! Sorry. I am just still baffled by how astoningly sad that is. Then moving into her examples. First of all. She had only two examples. Our teacher clearly stated multiple times that we needed at least three. AT LEAST! This is why I don't like people! Why are directions so hard to follow??????! So her first example started out.... okay. But then it fell off a cliff into a pit of meaningless sentences. By that I mean, she said how "the good old days had civility" and then contradicted herself by asking the reader if they were really the good old days...? Then she started listing facts about how the Vietnam War was the first time the "US full troop" was sent(Yes. These are the exact quotes from her paper. I can't explain why I remember them exactly other than the fact that I read it so many times because of how astounded I was by stupidity[i swear I'm not a mean human{at least not all the time}but a 1st grader could probably make more sense]). What do these random war facts have to do with civility?! Politeness?! Oooh it gets better too. Her second example came from the Bible... hey. It's a legit book that is believed to be a non-fiction piece of literature by many scholars. So it would be a legit source but just not for how she used it. She quoted a piece of scripture(from Revalations I believe) about judgement day. She basically said how God said that the more messed up the world is, the closer we are to judgment day. Yes. She went from how people aren't polite anymore, to War stories, and now she is telling her readers that they are all going to die very soon. If you thought I was being mean before then you probably take that back now because you too see that she was most definitely smoking something when she wrote this. Her conclusion didn't even wrap up the topic. It said how we should all get saved and trust in Jesus. Oh my god. My brain hurts. I have tried sooooo hard to see her point of view but I can't. None of that correlates with one another. How do you even come up with that bull???? I don't even know this girl but her thought process angers me. I can not deal with unintelligent life forms of any sort. Humans or animals. They just piss me off. That sounded completely f***ed up when I typed it out but whatever. Hopefully my readers won't think less of me because I'm angered by a girl who doesn't follow directions or try. I believe that if you set your mind to it, that you can do anything and succeed. That's what bothers me about her. You can tell from her writing that she did not try. Gahhhh. Kids these days do not have any work ethics. I'm still hyped from American Horror Story so that is why you all got a long and critical/harsh blog today about a random chicks paper.
Side note: I've noticed that my Gov/Econ. teacher checks his wrist to look at the time but he doesn't wear a watch. This is his first year teaching so he is still young. I'm going to assume he is intimidated by a group of seniors who are only a few years younger than him. So it is probably just a nervous habit of his.
So I turned in my rough draft today for English. Long story short, I was one of the very few people that only had one or no errors. I was quite elated too because my teacher butchered several peoples papers with just a glance. Which I am going to credit on my blogging so thank you to my loyal readers because without you I wouldn't write and if I didn't write I would probably have butchered my paper more. Granted, we don't turn in the final until Monday so by then I will probably manage to rethink all my writing descisions and screw it up.
Side note: the one error I had was the misspelling of Gory. I spelt it "Gorey" which is actually the name of an author which is why the spell check didnt pick it up because technically I wasn't wrong.
We had a revising/editing workshop today so we all switched papers. Dear God! The girls paper I got was absolutely horrendous. I'm not even trying to be rude or mean or whatever but what in the even. Was she high when she wrote this? So everyone had about thirty topics to chose from. Dhe chose to write about civility and how it nowadays we don't have any. Her thesis statement included a question!! What??! A thesis statement is a DIRECT statement where you promise the reader what they will be reading about.... you don't include a question there! Sorry. I am just still baffled by how astoningly sad that is. Then moving into her examples. First of all. She had only two examples. Our teacher clearly stated multiple times that we needed at least three. AT LEAST! This is why I don't like people! Why are directions so hard to follow??????! So her first example started out.... okay. But then it fell off a cliff into a pit of meaningless sentences. By that I mean, she said how "the good old days had civility" and then contradicted herself by asking the reader if they were really the good old days...? Then she started listing facts about how the Vietnam War was the first time the "US full troop" was sent(Yes. These are the exact quotes from her paper. I can't explain why I remember them exactly other than the fact that I read it so many times because of how astounded I was by stupidity[i swear I'm not a mean human{at least not all the time}but a 1st grader could probably make more sense]). What do these random war facts have to do with civility?! Politeness?! Oooh it gets better too. Her second example came from the Bible... hey. It's a legit book that is believed to be a non-fiction piece of literature by many scholars. So it would be a legit source but just not for how she used it. She quoted a piece of scripture(from Revalations I believe) about judgement day. She basically said how God said that the more messed up the world is, the closer we are to judgment day. Yes. She went from how people aren't polite anymore, to War stories, and now she is telling her readers that they are all going to die very soon. If you thought I was being mean before then you probably take that back now because you too see that she was most definitely smoking something when she wrote this. Her conclusion didn't even wrap up the topic. It said how we should all get saved and trust in Jesus. Oh my god. My brain hurts. I have tried sooooo hard to see her point of view but I can't. None of that correlates with one another. How do you even come up with that bull???? I don't even know this girl but her thought process angers me. I can not deal with unintelligent life forms of any sort. Humans or animals. They just piss me off. That sounded completely f***ed up when I typed it out but whatever. Hopefully my readers won't think less of me because I'm angered by a girl who doesn't follow directions or try. I believe that if you set your mind to it, that you can do anything and succeed. That's what bothers me about her. You can tell from her writing that she did not try. Gahhhh. Kids these days do not have any work ethics. I'm still hyped from American Horror Story so that is why you all got a long and critical/harsh blog today about a random chicks paper.
Side note: I've noticed that my Gov/Econ. teacher checks his wrist to look at the time but he doesn't wear a watch. This is his first year teaching so he is still young. I'm going to assume he is intimidated by a group of seniors who are only a few years younger than him. So it is probably just a nervous habit of his.
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